“I’ve never won anything before,” Ella said. “Not in my whole life.” Seven entire years. “Not even a raffle.” When she got the good news, about a month ago, one of her first questions was, “What will I wear?” (And who will you thank? I wondered. At the Oscars, the winners always acknowledge their mothers.)
“Only 36 poems won,” Ella told all her friends after that, “out of 160.” Her poem, written on the theme “heroes,” is called “Hamster-Explorer.” Its ten lines about a fearless, furry rodent, are on display to fearless city bus riders throughout Charlottesville.
The transit center, where the reading took place, was standing-room only. The age range was first grade through retirement, dominated by high schoolers. The youngest boy wrote about his teacher, who stood next to him. One man, who is a three-time winner, introduced himself as “chronologically mature.” His poem was about his parents—four years of education between them, raising five African American children in the deep South in the 40s—as his heroes.
One of my neighbors and a wonderful writing teacher at WriterHouse, Carey Morton, read a surprising poem about a feisty neighbor (not me!). Sarah Crossland, who was in a class with me at the University of Virginia, read a lovely poem about her grandmother, likening her hands to mother of pearl. Grandparents and parents dominated as heroes. (No need for an Oscar-style thank-you speech; the gratitude is embedded in the poem.) Some of the high school readers seemed surprised at the earnestness of their words, as if they had been outed as closet sentimentalists.
Susan Berres, the organizer, said, “What I love about poetry is its accessibility. Everybody’s got time to write ten lines.” You might not be able to commit to National Novel Writing Month in November. But a poem can be pieced together in snippets, like Frank O’Hara’s nervy and elegant Lunch Poems (written on his lunch hour). I loved the community feel of this event, of poetry not as elitist, but populist fun.
Mom says
Thank you for sharing this. I was thinking about all of you yesterday and wished I could see Ella accept her award. This makes me feel like I was there. I was in spirit. Congratulations to Ella. Such poise. She makes us all proud. Love, Mom
Tricia Harrigan says
Thought of you yesterday , C’ville Harrigans, and how I wish I could have been there! I had no idea the competition included grownups, and high schoolers. Ella’s prize is even more noteworthy than I had realized. I like the necklace she chose to wear – a good answer to “what shall I wear?” She looks charming. Doting Grammy
Rosemary Grout says
Congragilations Ella! It is a really good poem! From Rosemary and Frances
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